Week 1
Freshman in college
So hard to make friends; guess I’m
Just smarter than them
Comments: Adjusting to college can be tough. Drop by my office if you ever need to talk. Good use of a semicolon. –Professor Evans
Week 2
Far from home I meet
Someone who exposes me
To a whole new world
Comments: Glad to hear you’re having a better experience here. Also, avoid pop culture references in your writing; you’ll forget all about Jasmine and Aladdin once we study the Romantics! –Professor Evans